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    Will I forever be searching for things that'll never be found
    forever trying to stand up each time I'm down on the ground
    like a bird wanting to fly but having no wings
    not able to wait and to see just what my life brings

    Trying to prove myself knowing I'm going to fail
    not able to speak in front of others without getting pale
    looking at myself in the mirror and hate what I see
    and dreaming of someone I'd like to but will never be


    Will I forever be searching for the door to your heart
    forever trying to get in cause I loved you from the start
    looking at you from a distance and hope you to come here
    but to talk to you seems just to be my biggest fear

    Trying to prove you I'm cool but knowing I'm not
    dreaming of you and of things that I haven't got
    waiting to catch a smile from your lips so that I know you're glad
    lying and crying and staying the whole day in my bed

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    raindrops keep falling on my head
    and just like the guy whose feet are too big for his bed
    nothing seems to fit
    those raindrops keep falling on my head, they keep falling

    so I just did me some talking to the sun
    and I said I didn't like the way he got things done
    sleeping on the job
    those raindrops keep falling on my head, they keep falling

    but there's one thing I know
    the blues they send to meet me won't defeat me
    it won't be long till happiness steps up to greet me

    raindrops keep falling on my head
    but that doesn't mean my eyes will soon be turning red
    crying's not for me
    'cause I'm never gonna stop the rain by complaining
    because I'm free
    nothing's worrying me

    IT WON'T BE LONG TILL HAPPINESS STEPS UP TO GREET ME


    dear letiss,
    remember that old song? It just popped up in my head when I read your poem. Maybe it will be some comfort to you...

    Love isn't always easy. I can tell you're deeply hurt since I believe this poem is about the same person as in "Throwing stones...". Anyway, just don't try to act like you're someone else. You are a very intelligent, humorous and sensitive man -- qualities every woman is looking for! I don't know "your girl" but if she's not impressed by what you have to offer, she is most likely appreciating the wrong things in a man.

    Sometimes it's better letting go. This will be hell, but in the end you will realize that you are moving on with your life and finally be able to open up for that very special someone.

    I don't know what to say... I'd like to relieve your pain, but all I have to offer is that old song and my friendship. You can always talk to me. I may not be able to answer
    correctly but I promise I will listen.

    love!
    rina

    [Geändert durch twinklingstar am 27-11-2001 um 22:32]
    I’d like mornings better if they started later.

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    English poet Percy Bysshe Shelley wrote a perfect poem about his yearning for love. Please check out "Love's philosophy".
    =)
    I’d like mornings better if they started later.

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    Hey Carina!

    Well, obviously when I wrote those lines this happy sound song would never have come to my mind. Otherwise I wouldn't have been able to write them. But of course I know the song, but I just didn't ever listen to the text, cause if I'm honest, I never thought it could be an interesting one...

    Thank you for trying to make me feel better, but I should tell you that it's been a while since I wrote them, but recently I found the sheet of paper I wrote them on, so I decided to post them here. The situation is a bit different now, at least when you look at the lines where I wrote about her.

    Of course you are right, these two poems are about the same girl. I didn't know it's that obvious.

    Listening is often far more important than knowing the psychologically perfect answers. Cause there often is no correct answer!

    So again thank you very much for listening and thinking about the things I write!

    Love,

    Letiss

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    Sorry, I must have missed the finer sense between the lines. I didn't mean to embarass you or anything! Anyway, I'm glad things are different for you now. If you want to you could tell me how things turned out...
    I will be there whenever you need someone to listen.

    love
    rina
    I’d like mornings better if they started later.

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    Now I don't exactly know what you mean, maybe it was my fault and I didn't find the right words to express what I mean.
    Because you didn't embarass me at all, and I don't know how you could have done it.

    Well, at that time she was my girlfriend, more or less, but then we split up. In fact I didn't want to go on like that any more. I didn't want to feel like that any more. So I had to take this step though it was very very hard.

    And you were right in another point too, because she didn't really like my sensitive side, it was not the way she thought a man should be. Well I don't know if she appreciated the wrong things in a man, she just had another ideal of a man.

    Now I'll read the poem!

    Love,

    Letiss

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