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    Darkness is spreading in my nut
    Emptiness is warping my mind
    Which probably belongs to my head
    Like the amen to God

    Strange eyes stare at me
    Get caught in my soul
    Which is open and on show
    Which shakes and grieves

    They stare and spot
    The deep hole of guilt
    Bore and dig
    For remorse

    They bore deep into my bones
    Which crack, break and scream
    When they play violin on them

    They gnaw on my dress
    Which I knitted so nicely
    Every little stitch
    Carefully connected to the next

    Now they unpick it
    From the bottom of
    Until I stand there
    Naked and bare


    destiny's child

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    well i like it ... and i think as toby does ... its amazing how much people have to endure this kind of feelings now and then...

    reminds me of days i`d like to forget.

    you used some really strong pictures to express your feelings.
    well as i said before i like it

    [Geändert durch nicodemus am 19-01-2002 um 22:30]

    Nicodemus

    "Möget ihr in interessanten Zeiten leben!"(Fluch)

    "UGH!"(universelle erklärung)
    ___________________________________
    - Grußgedicht
    - Cultes des Goules
    - neugotisch
    - Herbstgesichter
    - traum vom wahn

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    so i'm impressed, toby what you see in my poem (originally a songtext). it makes me a little bit proud of
    i'm happy that you both like it.
    sure there are strong pictures. i like to exagerate with words. it's the best way to express how my feelings are.
    thahx a lot...

    regards
    fate
    destiny's child

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    Talking

    well keep up your high quality and i keep up such statements

    Nicodemus

    "Möget ihr in interessanten Zeiten leben!"(Fluch)

    "UGH!"(universelle erklärung)
    ___________________________________
    - Grußgedicht
    - Cultes des Goules
    - neugotisch
    - Herbstgesichter
    - traum vom wahn

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