Thema: Parasite

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    Parasite


    I’m not myself anymore
    My soul stands in front of a strange body
    It gives me a shock
    Cause it is so different from before


    Can you tell me
    What parasite lives in my body
    Subsists on my flesh and blood
    Ousts my soul


    I cannot make out this creature
    That is meant to be my self
    What do we have in common
    What life have we lived


    What does this body have
    That it is amused by
    What does this life have
    That a parasite lives it too



    destiny's child

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    hi toby,

    thanks for your words.
    it's good to know that my lyric sounds convincing.
    that's some of these things which are important.

    so, i'm sorry i'm not able to tell you any good sites.
    it's difficult to find something useful in english.
    that's why we have to write some... )

    regards
    fate
    destiny's child

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    Magnificent

    Ich bin überwältigt von soviel Selbstbewusstsein deiner Lyrik gegenüber!

    dario
    chico sagt was er denkt

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    findest du? ich glaube, das ist etwas hochgegriffen.
    destiny's child

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    Vertrau mir!

    ehrlich,hab soetwas vorher noch nicht gesehen,ausserdem bist du gerade bescheiden,wie jemand der sich über das was er sagt sicher ist,aber es nicht für gut an jemand anders vermitteln will!

    ich mag das,macht dich sehr sympathisch
    chico sagt was er denkt

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    ich muß drauf achten, nicht rot anzulaufen.
    also ehrlich...
    destiny's child

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    Hi Fate,
    good to read that you are obviously spreading with lyric impreesions. Haven't heard from you for quite a while, good to see you back.

    Your poems are very impresisve although most of them are scribbling something secret deep inside yourself probably, interesting. Don't stop, think forward, go forward there is no way as bad as the ones you already been through. It#s the way to reach targets............

    Regards
    ISOHOE
    In Search Of Heaven On Earth

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    hi isohoe,

    may be you haven't seen me for so long, cause you have also not been here.

    i'm really amazed by such positive critic i got from you.
    as long as i live i will be spreading with lyric impressions. i hope so...
    how can i reach targets with a bad way i choose?

    destiny's child

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    Fate,
    yes times are turning so it will be that there are days we got stucked in the traffics of thoughts and emotions.......

    Just one reason I haven't been online for a while.

    Answer to your question is quite simple:

    Once you realised you ARE on a bad way (or something let you think of it) you already reached one of your first targets: The knowledege of wlaking the bad way which most of the times isn`t a right one. So if you feel uncomfortable where you are, change directions, look at crossroads and turn left or right but never back!

    And as long as you're moving forward it's the firts step of reaching targets. Then again you might question yoursekf what targets, goals you're looking for.

    It's sometimes more of your givin
    then you're takin
    that makes your mind get shakin

    cause you'll realise
    no matter who you are
    for your true freinds you're a star...........

    Regards
    ISOHOE
    In Search Of Heaven On Earth

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    i don't know anymore how we came from a strange body to a bad or right way...?

    destiny's child

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