Sweet Death

[stoffl]

I feel odious
Senseless to cry
Envy the deads
Hopeless yearning
Sick of myself
I'm lifeless

Tired of being lonely
No fun
Gotta turn and run away
Don't wanna know something
Friends change into fiends
All hope is gone

Tried to find help
Senseless
Tears were coming
Darkness
Time stands still
Walk in circles

I feel odious
Senseless to cry
Envy the deads
Hopeless yearning
Sick of myself
I'm lifeless

The sadness comes as the sun sets
Screams which aren't loud enough
Bitter tears - invisible
People don't open their eyes
I should have been more wise
Feel like I'm nothing

Futile to make up my mind
Does anyone know
How to listen
Close my eyes
And begin
To fantasize

I feel odious
Senseless to cry
Envy the deads
Hopeless yearning
Sick of myself
I'm lifeless

I'm sick by making up my mind
Thinking about my fault
Were I spreading lies
Did I hurt them
I don't know
I'm so confused

Every time I tried to kiss their feet
To do what they want
This is not the way
My life has to be
Loud screams
Not loud enough

My thoughts stuck in pain and hate
Bad at me
Gotta die - take a pistol
Ebon eyes which are crying
My eyes
One last breath
And the soul is flying away


So, this is not really a poem...it's a song i have written one month ago...and i just wanna know what ya think bout the lyrics...plz tell me...

hugs...stoffl

[cascardian]

woah, if you have many poems ready to post, then please just open one thread with all of them in it. it would be far more nitide...

[Jasemin]

Hey verlier nicht deine Hoffnung...irgendwo da draußen ist jemand der genauso denkt und fühlt wie Du und der dein bester Freund werden wird...so lange wie Du ihn noch nicht gefunden hast mußt Du halt sehen daß Du oben bleibst ....so denk ich auch und bestreite jeden Tag egal wie mies alles läuft egal wie oft ich feststelle daß ich fast niemand liebe und alles sich zu ner Enttäuschung manifestiert...
try to be brave daß ist das was ich mir immer sage und daß soltest Du Dir auch immer sagen try to be brave and do your thing find solutions and don´t hang around and cry yourself to death ...